There's something
about long car rides,
gliding
on the smooth surface
while calm music plays
in the background,
that entrances me
and gives me
the blurry
~ Kimmie ~
about long car rides,
gliding
on the smooth surface
while calm music plays
in the background,
that entrances me
and gives me
the blurry
illusion
of complacency.~ Kimmie ~
After I read your poem, the first thing that came to my mind, was that you described a feeling that was "Almost Utopian".
ReplyDeleteI know it doesn't go along with it all.
I'll think of something better.
Wait, how about "Rapture"
Or is that too common?
Okay I give up. This is too hard. x_x
I am hopeless at titles but I really like your poem, it made me feel like I was in the car driving :)
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Cant Tell You, 'Rapture' is a nice title but it doesn't really work with this poem because it's not like a joyous feeling it's more of a satisfied feeling. But not really satisfied... Kinda like relaxed I guess... I dunno. It's hard to explain.
ReplyDeleteTalking Trash & Wasting Time, Thank you :)
Haha, no I understood what you meant.
ReplyDeleteThat's why I gave up.
Why don't you just name it "Complacency"?
I thought of that but there's just something about it that I can't really put my finger on which is why I'm not naming it that... It's hard to explain.
ReplyDeleteOhh, alright.
ReplyDeleteHey, I JUST saw that you finally gave a title to this poem!
ReplyDeleteIt's perfect (:
Thanks, Nikita helped :)
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