We live in a world of sickness
that doctors can not cure
The only remedy
lies beneath your inner soul
Nothing anyone says
can heal your heart's disease
Anything anyone does say
has the opportunity to expand
this plague
into an intangible holocaust.
~ Kimmie ~
Note: I think this is my best poem yet.. I hope you like it :)
that doctors can not cure
The only remedy
lies beneath your inner soul
Nothing anyone says
can heal your heart's disease
Anything anyone does say
has the opportunity to expand
this plague
into an intangible holocaust.
~ Kimmie ~
Note: I think this is my best poem yet.. I hope you like it :)
You're right. I take my words back.
ReplyDeleteTHIS is your best poem, not Angel.
Although Angel may be the second best.
Have you considered publishing your work?
This poem is realllyy good. Why don't you try?
Maybe when I have a lot of poems and stories I'll publish them. Thank you :)
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